Hi unknown,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive and tinged with pleading. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who wants to communicate with people to their faces. In this digital age I have heard many people say something similar. They believe that we are not really communicating via computer. I think you can get your point across very well on the internet. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.