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Hi!

Poetry has always been one of my favorite genre. It’s like a condensed story of mind. And I believe that It's a great thing of calmness too.

First I want to welcome you in WDC. It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

*Bulletg* TITLE:The title “High on a Hill” caught my attention. I think it fits your poem.

*Bulletg* THE POEM: This poem is about nature where geese flew south with resounding call, where the moss crunched loud beneath the poet feet. The poet beautifully expressed his feelings.

He painted a tranquil nature so beautifully. The nature of a hill that comforts her soul. It tells that sometimes a simple pleasure could cherish our heart

*Bulletg* RHYTHM:Your poem has good rhythm. It flowed beautifully.

*Bulletg* THEME:I like the theme.

Keep writing!!

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