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Unspoken  [E]
Sometimes people leave us before we get to say goodbye.
by Danial Lucas
Review of Unspoken  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Unspoken"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

Poetry has always been one of my favorite genre. People expressed their feelings through poetry. It’s like a condensed story of mind. And I believe that It's a great thing of calmness. As readers, sometime I read poems again and again, trying to understand the deepest meaning of it.

I really liked the way you put out your feelings. Every words are so true, emotional and nice rhythm. I like the stanza
“People forgotten, prisoners of time,
We're left never really saying goodbye,”

Thank you for sharing your excellent poem.

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