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 Escape.  [E]
For Flash Fiction contest. Word Count 300
by addie.cass
Review of Escape.  
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Addie.Cass!
This is pretty good for one of your first pieces on here!
Your descriptions were excellent, and you kept the action moving nicely as you let the reader know how worried you are being trapped with this 'filthy' being! And that surprise ending, although telegraphed a bit early, was great! That's one thing Arakun the Twisted Raccoon loves and looks for in this contest!
Flawless spelling and grammar (what should I expect considering your former professional occupation? *Laugh*), and the whole piece read smoothly!
Well done, Addie!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write (and according to your port intro, you have a novel just itching to get out!), then you're going to love it here!
PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something more about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course.
PSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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