Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! Hi Sammy, This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with frustration. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a writer who has lost their inspiration and is struggling to produce more pieces. This has happened to me more times then I care to count, and I have always found my voice eventually. I am hoping that the writer in the poem finds hie writer's voice. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
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