Hi Gilded Dragon,
This is a wonderful chapter. The chapter opens with vivid description. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the chapter. They will read on. This is a fantastic opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. You have set up your main character and plot well for your reader. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)Bailey Thompson groaned and stretched as she reach up to grind her fists into her eyes , hoping to erase any traces of sleep before she even opened them and when she did finally pry her matted lashes apart a small frown furrowed her brow because she discovered that she'd fallen asleep in her X Terra , something she never did and the sound of K.T's whining in the rear of the SUV made her aware of the fact that she wasn't alone .-Possible rewrite "Baily Thompson groaned and stretched as she reached up to grind her fists into her eyes, hoping to erase any traces of sleep before she even opened them. When she did finally pry her matted lashes apart, a small frown furrowed her brow because she discovered that she'd fallen asleep in her X Terra, something she never did. The sound of K.T.'s whining in the rear of the SUV made her aware of the fact that she wasn't alone."

The characterization is fully developed and believable. The chapter focuses on Bailey, and she comes across as a real person. Great job.