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 Destiny Lane, 300 words  [E]
written for Daily Flash Fiction contest, 8/22/19
by addie.cass
Review by Angus
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello again, Addie.Cass!
This is a pretty good, and having lived around railroad tracks my entire life, I can really relate to this.
I can't say I've ever walked the tracks in Charlie's inebriated condition, but apparently he was going to do it no matter what.
You did a great job with the prompt phrase, and that ironic ending was perfect. And so was naming that road 'Destiny Lane', although the reason for Charlie's demise wasn't because of the road's legend and/or purpose.
Flawless spelling and telling, and having the road 'chortle' at the end, even if it was only figurative, was great!
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Have fantastical day/evening/tomorrow, and good luck in the contest!
PS-You now have your first fan! *Bigsmile*

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