Hi sorrowfulregen,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of annoyance. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who hates sunny days because the sun reminds of the day everyone they love abandoned them. I am hoping that the speaker can mend the rift with the people they love. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.