Hi Tooyoungtoknow,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with joy and excitement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the Hutchins will find other forms of life on their travels in space. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a couple who are charged with the responsibility of finding other forms of like in space at the same time they have started a family. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.