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It's been a pleasure to review your story "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

This piece is so interesting. I really liked the way you put out your feelings about the true fact of world; which you are telling “But that's not only the reason why I hate the sun
It was a bright day when everything was gone”.

The title fit’s it. I liked the concept. I like the descriptions and presentations. Your points are clearly written.

I enjoyed.

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