Good morning! Thought I would come in for a little visit as I found this on the read and review page. I was drawn in by the title and by the description and as I began to read I found a clever poem indeed. It is all in how you play the game! I really enjoyed your poem from the very beginning to the very end as you paint a really clear picture for your reader to see and picture what it is that you are saying. I did not find any errors at all and I like the way you tell a story within your poem. If I would have to pick a favorite line I would say it would have to be the very two last lines of this poem yet I love how the whole poem makes me feel. Keep writing and keep sharing.
I am giving this poem a five-star rating.

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