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Ladybug Beach  [E]
I was five when I made this poem so if you leave reviews I will maybe remake it. Enjoy!
by Itchybarn
Review of Ladybug Beach  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought tHiNg/Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I was drawn in by the call of the Ladybug.

What does tHiNg/hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about your syllables per line. You have a good rhythm going here. You maintain a couplet rhyme scheme throughout, using ten or less syllables.

My favorite lines are where you keep it to seven syllables, which you do a lot.

Watching syllable count is a tHiNg I like to do. Shakespeare kept it consistent and he did pretty well.

What does tHiNg/hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This part was my favorite couplet:

Ladybugs were crawling everywhere! (9 syllables, so still under 10)
Some were even in my hair! (7 syllables)

This could explain the itchy in your barn. Well, it even made me itch a little and also made me smile.

Well done, Itch!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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