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Eclipse  [E]
Written after watching a lunar eclipse.
by ~Sue~
Review of Eclipse  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Eclipse"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

You have captured a unique moment off the moon beautifully. When the world covered with lunar eclipse.

I like the way you painted it. I enjoy the color, scents and the sound of this poem. It’s so full of wonderful thoughts. Your rhyming floats beautifully. I like the lines
their silver light across the land.
An image painted by God's hand.

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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