Hi freespirit,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. We don't often think about what we can learn from children, and I was anxious to find out more. I began to read right away. You introduce the topic with a brief description of the attitude most people have towards children. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. The piece is about the lessons we can learn from children. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.