Hi Grieving_Girl,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of sorrow and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is confused about why someone they love has left them for someone else. This poem will resonate with so many people. I can't think of anyone who hasn't gone through this exact thing at one time or another. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.