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Review #4502270
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 The Mansion in the Woods  [ASR]
Flash Fiction challenge
by AbbyOlson
Review by Angus
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Howdy, Abby Olson!
As a lover/reader/writer, and judge of horror, I thought this was pretty good! The spelling and grammar were flawless (thank you!), you did a nice job with the prompt phrase, and you kept the action moving all the way through it.
It didn't quite end the way I though it would though; in other words, that's the way most stories like this end.
But I know you had very limited word count, so I can't really fault you for that.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Abby, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-It's good to see somebody your age 'dipping their toes into the writing pool!' You obviously have talent, so I encourage you to keep at it! *Bigsmile*
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