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 Paradise of Strangers  [E]
Thoughts upon a park bench.
by Lou-Here By His Grace
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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You have simply, honestly and heartily expressed your feeling and emotions that you experienced sitting on a mall bench.

I liked you have worded your dreaming and sharing your thoughts mentioning your stay on a mall bench, very diversely and royally, feeling shared as if it was a paradise of strangers as you had been there, so live and pride feeling that you have expressed.

I enjoyed the word imagery and word visuals and rhymes in description of your feeling and thoughts.

Thank you for sharing this.
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