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 Rain  [E]
A poem about nature during a rainstorm
by M.J.M.
Review of Rain  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Rain"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: I like this poem. Through this entire poem, she painted out the nature of the rain so beautifully. I liked the imaginary and words of this poem.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity: The word vividly describes the feelings of you.

*Cut* Suggestion: Poetry has its own rules. I think you need lines breaks for this poem. Because, line breaks serve an important function in setting the rhythm of a poem. Otherwise, it a good poem.

I enjoyed it reading. Keep writing!!

*FlowerV**Vine2* Mina *Vine1**FlowerV*
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