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 Mythical creatures  [E]
Believing in mythical creatures.
by Andrea
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Bon jour, Andrea!
This isn't bad for one of your first pieces on here, and you really do make some very good points about mythical creatures. There are literally millions of people who believe in Bigfoot or some creature close to it, and plenty of people believe in the Loch Ness Monster. Your point about just because nobody has yet to prove they exist is a valid one. There are currently still creatures being discovered to this day that were considered extinct years ago (especially in the oceans since they're the one location we know so little about cuz it's never been explored!), so who's to say that Bigfoot and Nessie doesn't exist!
This is a little short, and there's a few small grammar and spelling niggles in this, but I think if you went back over this you'd see them. And it's really the main subject that counts anyway, right?
One last thing: if you're really interested in things like this, I'd suggest you do some research so you can back up this piece and even expand on it!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Andrea, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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