Good afternoon! What a clever, unique, rhythmical and very creative poem you have here. I was drawn in by the title but you put no description but I do like the title and that was enough to draw me in.
You are really good with words as you paint a very clear picture of what you what your readers to see. I really enjoy your poem from the very beginning to the very ending. I did not see any errors at all. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. I am giving your creative poem a five-star rating.

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