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Review #4503171
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ruwth is writing...  [18+]
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by ruwth
         Review for entry/chapter: "A Birthday Gift...
Review by Tinker
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi Ruwth, I found this fascinating. I am reviewing as my 2nd review at I Write and I don't think I've ever reviewed anything like it before.

My first impression was confusion. I had no clue what I was reading. But then I read it again and realized it like a blog entry. A simple slice of your life as you attempted to create something online for a birthday gift. Very clever Birthday Gif. I got it even though I have no idea how to make these illustrations or what Gif. stands for other than I see the label and see moving parts in an illustration. But you include places you used to help create and glitter them so I'm going to check it out, So cool. Maybe I'll learn something.

One technical glitch, in paragraph 3 you say, "I choose", I believe it should be "I chose". Picky picky but this a review.

Thanks for posting this at I Write. I would never have read something like this otherwise. Now I have to go exploring.

~~Tink

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