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Given: Sep 10, 2019 at 6:20pm
Length: 421 Characters |
421 w/o WritingML
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. It definitely fits the flash fiction genre, especially with the surprise ending. When she said: “... left for a while...”, I was thinking they were separated and she wasn’t yet accepting it. I liked the “target” analogy about how well the gifts suited her desire. The repetition of “dragging up to my room” at the end was a great way to end the piece. Really well done!
You responded to this review 09/10/2019 @ 6:22pm EDT
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