Hello Tinker ,

What a lovely poetry tribute to the Christian walk you have crafted here! I admire your humble honesty. It made the poem really relatable for me, and I suspect, for most readers with the desire to serve the Lord.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your beautiful dizane form poem. I think you did a great job with the form and I enjoyed the poem's message even more than the form's perfection.

Your poem is well done, flows nicely and evoked positive feelings in me as I read it. It brought me even more appreciation for fellow pilgrims' journeys.

I liked your poem's rhyming.

My favorite line was: "I often two-step when waltz was the plan," What a wonderful word picture. A much nicer and more creative way of saying "two steps forward, one step back."

What I loved most overall was your beautiful heart for God. You inspire me!

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem.

Your poem is so well written that I have no suggestions for improvement.

Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!

May God bless you and all you write and do!
PWheeler






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