Hello,

I'm Mastiff, and I'm going to review your work! I'm just an amateur, so take it all with a grain of salt, as it's just my opinions. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I appreciate being able to read it.

First impression:
Interesting reading the title and the first line. I had to try and decide if I believe that being mindful is the remedy for all things. It certainly can't hurt, but I'm not sure a real panacea exists!

Things That Might Make It Better:
I think you could have exchanged "everything" to make the piece work better for you. Perhaps mindfulness is really the path to inner peace, which seems to be where you went after the first line.

Mechanics:

Ln. 1 - Panacea coupled with everything is somewhat redundant.

Overall - Syllable counter says... 24! It's handy https://syllablecounter.net , but not always accurate!

Things I Like:
The last line. If I'm correct on what you intended to convey, it would be listening to yourself without preconception or judgement. That's what it said to me.

Final Comments
You conveyed quite a bit in just the 24 syllables, and it made me think. That is always good!

Mastiff