Hi R. Engels,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light and filled with humor. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a woman who is thought to be unbalanced because she prefers to have no hair. In fact, she is just different and doesn't care who knows it. I go my own way as well, no matter what other people think. The only person whose opinion I really care about is my boyfriend's. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
You responded to this review 09/14/2019 @ 3:12pm EDT
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