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 My Friend Claire has no Hair  [E]
A very silly poem I wrote for one of the poetry contests.
by R. Engels
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi R. Engels,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light and filled with humor. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a woman who is thought to be unbalanced because she prefers to have no hair. In fact, she is just different and doesn't care who knows it. I go my own way as well, no matter what other people think. The only person whose opinion I really care about is my boyfriend's. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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