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 I'm Not Done Yet  [13+]
A Poem about growing old
by R. Engels
Review of I'm Not Done Yet  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "I'm Not Done Yet"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only,

I like this poem because it tells the true fact of life. I like the emotions evokes in this poem. Aging is a process that we all go through. It is within our control, It can be difficult to accept..

I really liked the way you put out your feelings. The poem has a nice rhythm. The rhyming aa,bb makes this poem brighter. It contains lines, which are separated into five stanzas. The title, “I’m not done yet” fits this poem.

Thank you for sharing your work!

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