Hi jinks,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone is has lost a brother they had a complicated relationship with. I have lost many people in my life, and I felt this, exact way about a few of them. I am hoping that the speaker can find some peace in their mind about their relationship with their brother. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.