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Aloha, Bob!
I’m reviewing this as a "The WDC Angel Army"  Angel and to thank you for all the reviews you do on this site!
This is just plain freaky (not that some of your other stories aren't creepy, but this one seems to have some extra 'ooomph')! Methinks you've been reading too much Edgar Allan Poe! *Laugh* Seriously though, this does feel like something he'd write!
The idea of laying in bed trying to devise your wife's demise is a cool concept, and although it might make for a good story in a contest, you're going to have to decide sooner or later! Wives are prone to living longer than their husbands, and you wouldn't want to miss out on all that life insurance money just because you waited too long.
Pretty twisted, my friend. And I haven't the foggiest what you were thinking when you wrote this! *Laugh*
One niggle:
'The hours pass in plotting(,) my poisoned thoughts becoming a ticking time bomb resting in place.'
Great job, my friend!
Kee ponw ritin gon, and have fiendishly fabulous day!

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