Hi Wereh M,
This is a fantastic chapter. The chapter opens with a statement about Amelia's family circumstances. This has the reader feeling emotionally connected to Amelia and will read on to find out more about here. This is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. You have set put your main characters and plot very well for the reader. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The chapter concentrates on Amelia, and she comes across as a real person. Great job.