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 Dawn  [E]
A new day can bring hope.
by Andrew W
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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That is a lovely poem. It has good imagery. Where I live, on a harbor and outside of a rain forest, there is not much in the 'light shines all around'. lol However, the rain quit and the sun is shining as I read your poem. It fit quite nicely.

I was wondering, what were you doing or thinking about that caused you to write this poem? It's simply stated as Haiku's are, and very well done.
I'll toss you and apple off my tree so you can eat while you ponder your next masterpiece. lol
Thanks for sharing it, like I said, perfect timing with the sun in our area.
love, LinnAnn

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