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 Rainbow World  [E]
Regrets of not doing anything to achieve the desire world.
by Duepiter
Review of Rainbow World  
Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello, Duepiter!
This isn't bad for your first piece on here. I, as I'm sure millions of other people, share your dream of a 'Rainbow World', where everything would be like a Utopia. But unfortunately, that's all it is and ever will be, a dream, and in this instance, it can't and won't come true.
I don't know how old you are, but in the early 70's there was TV commercial that showed an old Indian chief looking at the cans and garbage around him, and the smoke and all the other pollution that the white man has destroyed his once beautiful planet with. Then it shows a tear rolling down the chief's cheek. Not a word is said during the 30 second commercial, but it said enough!
Anyway, I like your idea, and hopefully we can start taking care of this planet better before it gets too late! I have no idea what my Grandchildren will have by the time they're my age! And I'm 54!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Duepiter, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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