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A Duo Of Demons  [13+]
A little Halloween tale about a bad boy . . .
by W.D.Wilcox
Review of A Duo Of Demons  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "A Duo Of Demons"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This Halloween story is well written and told. Writing stories for children is a challenge because of the message. I find myself sometimes reading your stories here and I think they are all wonderful. I think your story could grab the children to reading it to the end.

You have good imagination, the dialogues are rich and floats well. It makes the children feel like they are traveling with the little characters. You crafted all the character so beautifully.


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