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Review #4505216
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Somewhere to play.  [E]
Blogging, to take over the world.
by RICH
         Review for entry/chapter: "There, have a cigar ...
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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You start off with a puppy. That is a great and happy event, and you reassur me that mom and pup are doing fine. Then you tell me there was a pup still in there? How did that happen? Was it dead? Did mom stop having contractions?

I'm sorry the surgery wasn't enough to save the mom. That is so sad! Did you have to bottle feed the pup? That can be hard to do around the clock for weeks. Who got the honor of feeding the pup? What did you name it? Was it a boy or girl? You can't leave me the reader hanging here. You drew me in, got my emotions involved but I want more information. Do you still have that puppy?
Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn
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