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INDEPENDENCE DAY  [E]
The way I spent a day.
by Monty
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

You Independence Day poem is wonderful, and I love the rhythm you have added to this poem. I like your second stanza.

Keep Writing!!!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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