Hello, Tinker
I'm sending this review as part of I Write in 2019. I'm reviewing this for my bonus review to earn the merit badge.

My Impression
This looks like an interesting form. This particular poem is informative, and I like the ending...even though it's a bit morbid or sad to say that considering the tragic nature of it. I do like the idea of "he attempted to embrace moon's reflection."

Suggestions
I would suggest putting the poetry form information in your drop note, instead of just the link to the contest.

Grammar/Punctuation/Usage
I didn't notice anything here.

Rating Explanation
This is a short but interesting poem that gives the reader an informative tidbit about its subject. Knowing the particulars of the form would be helpful here, but there's enough here for me to know it's a well thought out piece. I give this a 5. Good luck in the contest!

IceSkating SugarCube

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