Hi Jimamiordu,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is desolate and sombre. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about your difficulty making connections in your life. I hope that your situation improves over time. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation here, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.