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 Poems  [E]
This is where I'm going to put most of the poems I write. Most recent update: 3/24/22
by monarch_love
Review of Poems  
Review by Angus
In affiliation with Cross Timbers Groups  
Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello, Grieving Girl.
I know you have this under one genre of 'nonsense', but it really isn't: you're writing about your pain and the loss you feel, but sadly you're also putting yourself down! You are NOT ugly and people DO love you!
I'm what you kids might call an old fart since I'm 54, but I was young once too. And I know how you feel cuz I've been there. And I'm sure you've heard this a million times before, but you WILL get over this! It's NOT the end of the world, no matter how dark it may seem!
But more than anything, you have to stop putting yourself down!
I'll say one last thing: writing your feelings down can be very cathartic (make you feel better), even if nobody else reads the words! Keep that in mind!
Write on, rock on, and keep your chin up, G.G. *Music1* The sun will come up tomorrow! *Music2*
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