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Review #4505829
Viewing a review of:
Snow's Writing for 2019, 2020, & Beyond  [13+]
This book holds the items for the contest I enter in 2019, 2020, and beyond.
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
         Review for entry/chapter: "Singing the Scred Scriptures a Three-Five-Seven poem" 
Review by eyestar~*
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Fairy* Hiya Prosperous snow! I am happy to review this piece in "I Write in 2019!"

Wow! I just learned about this form of poem and was happy to see your entry. I like how you incorporate the Bab and your faith into this format too! I think the topic suits the form and your title is appealing as I like music, and sacred chants. *Smile*

The structure is well constructed with appropriate word counts. The pauses are effective and I enjoyed interplay of the music with the scriptural words and how the parts of each line reflect each other.
My favourite is "croons holy words" and the spirit through the chords! Wonderfully vivid images! *Heart*

The tone is spiritual and reveals the joyful blending of the words and music that give an even loftier vision of tribute. *Angel* The repetition of "s" sounds adds to the flow of the read as well.

Thanks for sharing your vision and craft. I find this to be a challenging format and appreciate the effort to get it to work out, especially the parallels. *Star* Write on!

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