Hello Mastiff ,

It is always a pleasure to read your work. Once again, I had high expectations and you met them with this interesting piece about Hemmingway, his life, his work and how you relate to it. I haven't seen the assignment of the contest you're writing for but I suspect you fulfilled it perfectly.

I enjoyed reading your interesting essay. I learned a lot about Hemmingway and was impressed with the way you conveyed a lot of information in an enjoyable format. I especially liked your introspection and application.

Although I haven't seen some of the movies you quoted, I could still vividly picture the scenes you mentioned.

Your essay is well done, flows nicely and was educational without being preachy or boring.

I liked how you structured your piece.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your article.

Your piece is so well written that I have no suggestions for improvement.

Thank you for sharing your informative essay with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler





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