Hello 🌑 Darleen - QoD ,

Happiest Writing.com anniversary month wishes to you!

I found your poem in "I Write in 2019" and liked what I saw at a glance so chose it to be my "bonus" review for week 37. Yes, I am behind in my activities there. But you're on the ball! Well done!

I enjoyed reading your "Metamorphosis" contribution to the Shadows and Light Contest. I thought the whole poem was great and I especially loved the ending. It was uplifting and left me feeling on a warm and fuzzy note.

Your poem is well done, flows nicely and evoked strong feelings in me as I read it.

You employed a unique free form structure that felt almost like a form poem but wasn't any form I recognized. Maybe you could name it and it could be a new form!

I thought your use of a power word in the sixth line of each stanza really made the poem stand out in a good way. I suspect that you will do well in your contest. As you can guess by now, I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem.

Your poem is so well written that I have no suggestions for improvement.

Thank you for sharing your emotional poem with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler





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