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This is a thoughtful poem. The image that comes to my mind is a leader.

Poetry is one of my favorite genre. It’s a great device of express feelings. As readers, sometime I read poems again and again, trying to understand the deepest meaning of it. Throughout the history poem has been used to expressed peoples feeling for rights, for social change etc... It is a popular device for awakening people..

I like the way you put your feelings. The poem has a nice rhythm. It contains thirty six lines, which are separated into Nine stanzas. The title, “Chicken Donny” fits this poem. The fonts is appropriate. I like the tweety bird image you have posted.

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