Hi Dennis,
This is a wonderful story. The tone is full of pain and sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the speaker will harm themselves or find a way to improve their life. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a man who is devastated when his girlfriend leaves him for another man. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the speaker, and he comes across as a real person. Your dialogue consists of one line that reflects what doctors would say to the speaker, and it is well done and realistic. The doctors treating the speaker speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across a couple of structural issues that need your attention:

1)saying word like-"word" should be "words".

2)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.