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  |  | Wheel of Fortune  [18+] My blog--I pull a card--if it doesn't speak to me...perhaps it is for you?  |
| (4.0)   "I Write in 2019" has me reviewing your item as one of my extra reviews today!  Title: The title of the entry is the date rather then the actual title of your poem. This is the pattern you have used for the whole book so I am guessing it works for you. I prefer using the real title simply as a mechanism to whet the appetite of my readers. I suggest putting your title in a bolded font. At first, I thought your syllable count was off because I considered "Choose" to be the first line of your poem. Of course, you have to bold the prompt so maybe bolding the title would be confusing... Contest Information: I know from your post on "I Write in 2019" that your poem is an entry written for "Invalid Item" . Because dilatory is bolded, I assume it was the prompt that day.I would like that information available in your entry. You can add it in a dropnote to keep your entry clean in appearance. The Main Course: I like your poem but I am not sure you used the word dilatory correctly. Summary: I took a moment to look at the body of your item and some other entries. I am not sure I understand the phrase about the Tarot cards. For me, it detracts a bit from your poem. Perhaps a dropnote would work for this as well and let your poem take center stage more solidly. Anyways, I choose life!    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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