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 Who are They?   [E]
For The 48-hour challenge
by nix
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Review by Angus
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Greetings, Nix!
This is a neat little piece, and I'm glad that 48 Hour Challenge inspired you to write about something like this! Also, thanks for reminding me about it! *Bigsmile*
You've made a great point about how much society in general has changed in the last few years, and I totally agree with you. No longer do people want to sit down and debate on things or explain why their opinion is better, they just want you to HEAR their opinion without listening to YOURS! It's a sad state of affairs, especially when you consider this in a political ideology! I just heard last night that the United States has not been this divided between parties in a long time, and maybe not ever! Neither side wants to listen to the other, and I fear it's going to destroy this country if things don't change soon! In fact, one certain so-called 'leader of the free world' even suggested that there could be another civil war if he were to be impeached! I won't go into that, but it makes me wonder (and worry!)...
Great job with this, Nix!
One tiny niggle you might to look at:
'...succeed in breaking through this though trend...'
Otherwise, bravo!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Nix, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-I know you have your bioblock (biography) set up already, but perhaps you could add to it so we could know a little something more about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course.
PPS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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