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 All Hallows' Eve  [13+]
Sitting out Halloween Eve, should have stayed inside....
by tj ~ endeavors to persevere!
Review of All Hallows' Eve  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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I saw your posting a few days ago saying you were going to write a poem. Pardon typos, typing with a brace on my hand. this is hard, sorry.

The tempo was a bit out of whack. I didn't count measures just said the poem. Other than that it s pretty good. *Laugh*

You got and held my attention and the poem was perfect for the season. You're second verse reminded me of night before Christmas. was that intentional? lol
I don't read scary things and for you this must be very mild. me, My heart was racing and I was in bed way ahead of you.
Thanks for sharing
love, LinnAnn

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