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What brought tHiNg/Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*You entered "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week"  today so I am in a reviewing kind of mood.

What does tHiNg/hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about Brian and all his bad influence. There is the sense of foreboding from our narrator, but I feared for him, not Brian. I was surprised when Brian was the one who ended up the way he did.

What does hooves moo and tHiNg applaud about while reading your item?

I liked how you surprised me at the end. Well, it sounds like Brian is a big dose of trouble however we slice it. I was glad our storyteller was unscathed by the experience.

Nice work!

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are my reactions to what I have read and the thoughts that I have. They are not meant to be harsh critiques or detailed editing forays because that's not what I enjoy.

I enjoyed reading your story very much!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 10/08/2019 @ 11:51am EDT
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