Hi Allison,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is suffering from writer's block and tries having a drink of whiskey in order to help the ideas come. I am hoping that the drink helps the speaker and they get inspired. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I have suffered from writer's block more times than I can count and know exactly what is feels like. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.