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 |  | Pretty Ugly Words  [18+] Poetry and prose for contests. The occasional "slider" poem.  |
| (4.5)   Hail Sugar Cube! I am happy to review to celebrate you! I found this in the "I Write in 2019' forum.   I enjoyed reading your model of the Argonelles! I had to laugh at line 4 as it was so evocative and really dramatized your point! The theme is appealing and I hear want you say about judgement and drama. It is exhausting I think. Time alone is essential. The poem is well composed according to the guidelines of the form and it was easy to read with a solid flow and strong vibe. I like the rhyme of "drama" and "mama". The last line has a tone that reflects a no nonsense vibe like a line in the sand. The forth line with the word "ain't" provides a dramatic contrast and made me think of a rap! Cool. The punctuation assisted the read and I did wonder if a comma might be useful after "drama".  This was fun to read. Thanks for sharing your vision and the argonelles form. Fine writing.   Write on as you follow your muse. eyestar 
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