Good morning! I stumbled across your poem and was drawn in by your Title and I like the description as you put on it who the poem is written for and as I came on in I found a very clever, unique, and very creative poem. I enjoyed it from the very beginning to the very end. You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture of what you want your readers to see and also feel. I did not see any errors in your poem at all. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. I am giving your poem a five-star rating.

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