I have a hand in a cast, and my keyboard is so old I cant see the letters, pardon typos.

I loved the imagery and emotion in your poem. Have you thought of breaking your sentences into smaller lines?

Take me back to the oaks
that sway in the breeze,
with the wind in our hair
and the sunset tease.

Shorter lines make it look more like a poem. This is just a suggestion.

You have a typo-filled our minds-is what you wanted I believe.

Was this written for your child? It's such a happy poem.

Being part Irish, I love the 'o that you use. lol
Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

love, LinnAnn